Since the last conglomeration was so popular we decided to write another poem together. By Edward Hotspur and HastyWords!
It pains me to see that look
Unfolding behind your eyes
Desire for someone else
Fueling a passion full of lies
It hurts for me to see you stare
And smile so blissfully
At someone across the room
When you’re sitting next to me
It’s not just your choice of clothes
Or the secrets locked in your smile
It’s the mysterious glimmer in your eyes
Things I haven’t seen in awhile
Am I not enough for you
Be honest with me
Is someone out there all the things
That I could never be
Marriage was never our guarantee
So I am no longer the person I used to be
Always trying to be your everything
You changed the very core of me
We said we’d always be together
We said forever and swore
Til death do we part, and we do
But you don’t anymore
So here I sit watching you
Seeing promises in her you want to keep
I’m now your version of me
And feeling I settled far too cheap
You two go together like ice cream and (real) chocolate syrup! Great stuff
Beautiful as always, sad.
5 *’s.
Forever is such a short time, these days.
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I have never written a piece with someone else… I am fascinated by the idea…
I don’t see your e-mail anywhere on your gravatar or on your page… do I already have it and have forgotten?
I would love to try that.
As long as no one’s husband is going to show up at my door with a gun or a baseball bat… fist fights are totally acceptable though.
Cheers.
I will wait with baited breath… but not the inappropriate kind.
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