You took my hand and we ran for awhile
Under limitless skies of sunlit blue
Words fell like waterfalls
From mountains that touched the sky
You kissed me under rainbows
Hugged me beneath flowing willows
We dove into the ocean, the two of us
And swam forever and a day
Free as the currents of the sea
And life…
Life felt like a dream
And then the darkness came
Bringing with it sorrow
All the beauty we shared
Got lost in the murky shadows
The words stopped flowing
Our kisses turned to poison
And before long we got lost in the crowd
Beneath smothering blankets of cloud
And life…
Life felt too much like reality
A full cycle…all too true!
I love the usage of colors!
Besides loving every word from your poem, your picture is stunning and beautiful. Great work!
NOOOOOO!!!! make everything better….
This is a whole poem – too much stuff you read is some tenuous idea surrounded by too many words that try to hard to make the idea sound real. But not this. this has all the elements that make a poem ring true.
Awww many thanks for that
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Awww thanks I love the idea of this award!!!!
You’re welcome!
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that’s just the story of life. at one point we flow together and at the next point we drift apart and form two streams and flow separately.
beautiful poem.
I just nominated you for the beautiful blogger award
A billion drops of water that falls on earth. Is a billion times how one feels in the heart of love how passionate we all are for this life and mother-earth.
Say, Are you ready for this Monday?
Happy New Year and looking forward to more insights and fun things from you. Enjoying your blog a lot.
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Poignant for me…