SO….I LOVE YOU (DUET)

So This Old Toad took one of my poems and made it better! It’s like a song…his added words are grey!

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Written by ThisOldToad and HastyWords

So…I love you

And I love you

I say it a lot

Yes…Sweetie you do

Too much

Not at all

Like you might forget

Never, ever I bet

In one ear out the…

Anyway…I love you

Me too, I do love…

I’m crazy, you’re crazy

Both in different ways

Yes to the end of all our days

I hear a bunch how

You are amazing

Because I am difficult

Maybe

Flirty

Occasionally

Stubborn

Extremely

Emotional

Most passionately

Opinionated

You don’t sit there quietly

Talkative

I love that, most definitely

Aggressive

Never, never hardly ever

But hear me out

Because I love you

And I love you

And that’s enough right?

Yes darling to my delight

I am also

Loyal

Without a doubt

Honest

Incredibly

Silly

Laughingly

Forgiving

Indefinitely

Committed

Evidently

Protective

Courageously

And that’s good, I think

As I wink

Not one thing exists

In this entire world

Of loving bliss

That compares to the love

That excites

To the feeling of comfort

The feelings of joy

To the safety I feel

When I am wrapped

Lovingly as you must

Protected in the trust

I must, I must, don’t let go

Of your loving arms

And joyfulness

So forgive me if I am saddened

As I’m lost in a daze

By the unhappiness in your gaze

I somehow realize

Don’t blame me when I try

With questions to probe

In your minds eye

Ways I can help you find

This happiness you seek

Wishing we’ll always keep

Together we will find it

Maybe buried deep

And when we do

We’ll be two

I bet all the stars in the sky

Will laugh and cry

It has been waiting right there

Always for me

Idol and patient

Lovingly

Right inside of you

Please help me to

Get inside of you

The place where happiness is born

You’ll see

The place where happiness belongs

For you and me!

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