Lizzi wrote a beautifully wonderful poem HERE and she inspired me to pick a metaphor and write my own. Hope you like ❤
I stretched out long
For the summer sun
Absorbing its heat
Until I was empty
Nothing left to give
I remained silent
Weighed down
By sharp stones
And left with
Broken limbs
Forgotten and
Wholly overgrown
Until you came
And shielded me
From the torment
Of his desert stare
I felt you soft
Your sound dripping
Onto my dusty flesh
Your presence
Soaking deeper
Quenching my thirst
Mmmmm please
Fall into my bed
Because I love
Feeling you flow
Through my curves
Around my bends
Filling me so full
I can feel you
Caressing my shores
Until finally
The waves of you
Crash into me
And overflow
Hard boundaries
We can’t control
And I become
The foundation
Over which
Your love flows
WOW…Um. Yikes!
Yeah, I KNEW you had it in you 😀
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https://thelighteningandthefire.wordpress.com/2015/05/14/los-angeles-died/
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Wow, just wow!! lovely 🙂
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Gorgeous! Damn…the brain is in the gutter today and now it’s thinking. 😈
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Tag – you’re it 😉
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Working on it. Think I have a good one.
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MMmmmmm looking forward to it 🙂
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Very, very, very passionate and steamy. I think I need a lie down in a darkened room after reading that.
Beautifully written.
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Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
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Wow, very intensely passionate.
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That and your electric eyes.
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The passion! Enjoying your posts tonight as i scroll through my feed
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Beautiful poem..
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Beautiful poem
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oh my
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